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Friday, July 18, 2014

Featured Author Dawn Kopman Whidden Interview Part 2


Dawn Kopman Whidden is a native New Yorker and successful author who grew up in the close-knit community of Little Neck Douglaston during the baby boomer era. She graduated from Queensboro Community College.

Twenty years ago, she traded in her days of living in the bustling city for a more serene and tranquil life on a small farm in the town of Bell, located in North Central Florida.

She is retired and shares her life and love with her husband of fourteen years and an adopted stray dog she named Casey. She has also been blessed with two beautiful grandchildren.

Interview:


Describe a typical day when you are writing. Do you have any pre-writing rituals?

I’m not a very ritualistic person. I never was good with routines. My day is never the same. One day I will do the laundry in the morning, cook and clean, the next day I may just watch T.V or play Candy Crush all day.  My husband can’t understand how I get things done, but the house is always clean, food is cooked and the laundry done.
I sometimes would get an idea and would write in the bathtub. Often I woke up in the middle of the night and write a few chapters. My life is harem scarem, but organized at the same time.

Do you have a favorite author?

I have a lot of favorite authors and I guess you can say I change my mind a lot. I love Stieg Larsson author of the GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATTOO, and was devastated when I heard he had passed on. I love Ken Follett, I think he’s a genius. Nora Roberts, Patterson, there are so many, too numerous to list.

What are your favorite top 3 books that you would recommend?

I WOULD DEFINITELY TELL MYSTERY READERS to pick up THE GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATOO SERIES..
FOR THOSE who love a good historical novel, Ken Follet’s trilogy which starts with FALL OF GIANTS. ( which I am looking forward to his third of the series) OR OF COURSE..A CHILD IS TORN, FACELESS AND STOLEN!!

What book, if any, are you reading now?

I am reading DIVERGENT

Do you prefer to read traditional books or e-books?

I would prefer PAPERBACKS or Hard backs, but I will read anything!!


Out of the books that you have read, which character couple would you like to invite over for dinner and why?

I think I would love to have JD.ROBB’S Roarke and Eve.. She’s an awesome character and he is just plain a hunk! 

What was the last thing you googled?

I google all the time, but for my book, I did google some information about firearms. I try to make my story line as realistic as possible.

If you could describe yourself in 5 words what would they be?

I hope these words would be used to describe me by others as well

Curious,
Loyal,
Empathetic
Cautious
Honest

What is your biggest pet peeve?

Negative attitudes.

Where can your fans find you?

I am all over the place on the internet.. Just type in my name DAWN KOPMAN WHIDDEN and take your pick! Facebook is where most of my activity can be found, or my website










Thursday, July 17, 2014

Featured Author: Dawn Kopman Whidden Interview Part 1


Dawn Kopman Whidden is a native New Yorker and successful author who grew up in the close-knit community of Little Neck Douglaston during the baby boomer era. She graduated from Queensboro Community College.

Twenty years ago, she traded in her days of living in the bustling city for a more serene and tranquil life on a small farm in the town of Bell, located in North Central Florida.

She is retired and shares her life and love with her husband of fourteen years and an adopted stray dog she named Casey. She has also been blessed with two beautiful grandchildren.

Interview:

How did you come up for the concepts for A Child is Torn and Faceless?

Actually A CHILD IS TORN was a conceived from a nightmare I had one night. I woke up at 3 o’clock in the morning and told myself that I needed to immediately write down the scene I had just visualized in my sleep. I have said many times before the dream I had awoken from would make a good movie or novel, but I never wrote it down immediately and then would forget it.
I didn’t want to lose this one, so I opened my laptop and began to write. I wrote almost compulsively for 3 months.
Faceless literally came out of no-where. Same with STOLEN, it was just a vision that popped into my mind.

Without giving away any spoilers, for those who have not read A Child is Torn and Faceless, what was your favorite scene to write?

I think my favorite scenes in both novels were the scenes that brought tears to my own eyes. Even when I would reread, knowing the outcome it would bring a tear or two to my eye.

Describe a typical day when you are writing. Do you have any pre-writing rituals?

I’m not a very ritualistic person. I never was good with routines. My day is never the same. One day I will do the laundry in the morning, cook and clean, the next day I may just watch T.V or play Candy Crush all day.  My husband can’t understand how I get things done, but the house is always clean, food is cooked and the laundry done.
I sometimes would get an idea and would write in the bathtub. Often I woke up in the middle of the night and write a few chapters. My life is harem scarem, but organized at the same time.

Do you have any plans for a book signing event?

I have book signings in my town and donate the profits to GRACE MINISTRY a thrift store that helps in the rehabilitation of men and women with a substance abuse problem.

Can you give us an idea of what to expect in your next book?

STOLEN is scheduled to be released this summer. It’s the story that revolves around a mysterious little boy who is found at the scene of a murder. He is unable to communicate verbally, and the detectives Whitley and Kael are stumped. They do not know where he came from or if he has been so traumatized it has caused his silence.

What came first, the characters or the concept for the story?
My main characters are carry over’s from my other two novels. Although the characters appear in all three novels, they are independent stories. You can read one with out the other, but I would hope the reader becomes as invested in them as much as I am.
If A Child is Torn and Faceless became a movie, who would your dream cast be?

That is something I often think about. First of all there is no question in my mind that WHOOPIE GOLDBERG would be perfect for Judy the head administrator at ARMISTACE HOSPITAL FOR EMOTIONALLY DISTURBED ( and very troubled and dangerous children)

I haven’t really found someone I would think would make a good Hope, maybe the girl who plays Sam on General Hospital. There is a show on the air now called MOTIVE, the lead actress I can see as my lead detective Jean Whitely. The redheaded fireman on Chicago Fire, would fit the bill as Justin. Daniel Goddard from the Young and the Restless first choice for Marty.


Do you ever read the reviews about your books? If so, do you pay attention to any negative reviews or let them influence your writing?

I definitely pay close attention to all my reviews, especially the critical ones. So far I have been extremely lucky and only received on 2 Star review and that person said they wanted to give it 2 ½ stars. I take all criticism in to account and try and learn from them all. I want to be a better writer and no one has a better right to tell the author what they need or want then the person who paid good money to purchase the book.

Do you have a favorite author?

I have a lot of favorite authors and I guess you can say I change my mind a lot. I love Stieg Larsson author of the GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATTOO, and was devastated when I heard he had passed on. I love Ken Follett, I think he’s a genius. Nora Roberts, Patterson, there are so many, too numerous to list.

What are your favorite top 3 books that you would recommend?

I WOULD DEFINITELY TELL MYSTERY READERS to pick up THE GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATOO SERIES..
FOR THOSE who love a good historical novel, Ken Follet’s trilogy which starts with FALL OF GIANTS. ( which I am looking forward to his third of the series) OR OF COURSE..A CHILD IS TORN, FACELESS AND STOLEN!!

What book, if any, are you reading now?

I am reading DIVERGENT

Do you prefer to read traditional books or e-books?

I would prefer PAPERBACKS or Hard backs, but I will read anything!!


Out of the books that you have read, which character couple would you like to invite over for dinner and why?

I think I would love to have JD.ROBB’S Roarke and Eve.. She’s an awesome character and he is just plain a hunk! 

What was the last thing you googled?

I google all the time, but for my book, I did google some information about firearms. I try to make my story line as realistic as possible.

If you could describe yourself in 5 words what would they be?

I hope these words would be used to describe me by others as well

Curious,
Loyal,
Empathetic
Cautious
Honest

What is your biggest pet peeve?

Negative attitudes.

Where can your fans find you?

I am all over the place on the internet.. Just type in my name DAWN KOPMAN WHIDDEN and take your pick! Facebook is where most of my activity can be found, or my website










Wednesday, July 16, 2014

Featured Author Dawn Kopman Whidden - Stolen Book Review


Stolen

By Dawn Kopman Whidden
5 Stars

Review by Rene




In the mood for a GREAT Psychological thriller? Then this is the story for you!! This story grabs a hold of you from the turn of the first page and continues to grip you through out the entire story!

Jean, Marty and Hope are back, along with a few of the other characters, to solve what turns out to be a 25 year old mystery.

The story starts off with a murder, the way all great thrillers should start!!

A string of 911 calls were received by a group of local hunters in the woods. They recently witnessed a small child, shirtless and shoe-less, running and screaming through the woods, multiple gunshots fired, a cabin with a gunshot victim, and another victim who is deceased.

When police arrived they found another young child, a girl around the age of 4 or five, Michaelah, in the small cabin in a back room. This poor child has was quivering on a bloody mattress in a room with a video camera on a tripod. What went on this room could only be described as horrific!

The body of the deceased man was later identified as Archie Blakely, convicted of molestation of a seven year old boy and served 1 year in prison, a few years later he was accused of trying to abduct a neighbors 7 year old son and was acquitted, solicitation , misdemeanors, traffic infractions and a domestic dispute. This guy was seriously bad news!! There was another gunshot victim and he was identified as Troy Blakley, Archie's son. Now, who was the shooter? Is there a third party? Where is the weapon? Who ever shot these men, is still out there.

Marty quickly identified the young girl as Michaela Sandberg, she was abducted a few months ago. After a few weeks of searching for her, law enforcement had stopped their search, claiming that they could no longer afford to spend the funds and personnel to continue a search and rescue because at this point it would be considered a recovery mission. Her parents never gave up the search or hope, in hopes that their baby girl would return to them. Law inforcement  knew that if a child was not found within the first 48 hours, the chances were that she wouldn't be found alive. These parents were extremely lucky, their baby will be returned.

Back at the station, Jean has been looking through the system for missing kids to see if any of them fit the description of the young boy, Tristen, but nothing has come up. Neither child has spoken to anyone at this point, and with their only other lead witness in critical condition, these two small children are the only ones who knew exactly what went on in that cabin.

This story suddenly takes a turn when Marty receives a call from Lieutenant Sanders of the HITS division of the Oregon State Police. Marty and Sanders talked about the Archie case and Sanders filled him in on some very insightful information. 

Curious? Of course you are, unfortunately this is all your going to get from me! hahahahaah.....you need to read this book!!! Twists and turns do not eve begin to describe the plots in this book. This book is such a captivated read, it is filled with such excitement and suspense. I cannot wait to see what Dawn has in store for us next!!!



Will detective Marty Keal and Jean Whitley be able to find out the identity of a little boy before it’s too late?

In the riveting mystery novel Stolen, detective Marty Keal is on leave handling personal business when he is drawn back into a case with all of the makings of a sinister event. His partner, detective Jean Whitley, is first on the scene of a horrible crime that took place in a cabin in the woods. She arrives to find an older man dead, a younger man seriously wounded and a half naked child in the back of the cabin who’s apparently been missing for 3 months. Then, the detective finds a little boy running through the woods with little clothes and barely able to communicate. The police have a lot on their plate as they race to find out who the nameless men in the cabin are, who is the distressed little boy and what is the possibly frightening connection between them all?


Highly reviewed author Dawn Kopman Whidden has penned yet another disturbingly memorable mystery that lovers of Patricia Cornwell and James Patterson will be clamoring to read. From beginning to end, Stolen is a fast paced murder mystery with a twist around every turn!


Stolen is a standalone novel that features two intriguing detectives from Dawn Kopman Whidden’s previous mystery novels A Child Torn & Faceless: A Mystery.



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Monday, July 14, 2014

Featured Author Dawn Kopman Whidden - Stolen Excerpt


Stolen

Dawn Kopman Whidden



Prologue

The first of the nine-one-one calls came in at 8:14 a.m. A small group of hunters witnessed a small child running and screaming through the woods. The caller told the dispatcher that it appeared the boy was shirtless, and possibly shoe less, and he was concerned because the child seemed to be alone and frightened. He explained to the operator that they had tried to intercept and detain him, but the boy was too fast and disappeared into the darkness of the woods.

The second of the nine-one-one calls came in a minute later at 8:15 a. m. The call was from a young couple hiking through the woods. They reported seeing what appeared to be a half-dressed child running from a cabin, not far from the path they were on. They told the dispatcher they noticed the boy just moments after hearing what they thought to be gunshots. Normally, the gunshots wouldn't have caused any concern, this being hunting season. Being gun owners themselves, they determined at least two of the shots were fired from a handgun—not a hunting rifle or shotgun. After a short discussion of what they should do, they decided to call nine-one-one and report the incident.

The third of the nine-one-one calls came in at 8:17 a.m.; one minute after the first car was dispatched towards the vicinity. The first group of hunters, in an effort to find the boy, came across the cabin that the second call mentioned.

It was there the hunters came across the two bodies. “One male, approximately twenty-five years of age,” the caller told the nine-one-one operator, “was laying just inside the cabin, with multiple gunshot wounds, one to the stomach and one to his chest.” The caller confirmed the victim was still alive, but barely.
The second victim was also male, but definitely older. His body was further inside the cabin and the caller told the nine-one-one operator, “There is no question, he is deceased.”

“Are you sure, sir? Is it possible you are mistaken?” The dispatcher asked the man.

“Damn sure,” the hunter answered, “I’m a physician. He’s definitely deceased.”


By the time the fourth nine-one-one call came in, the first officer, who was dispatched to the scene, arrived on what he thought was a possible DOMESTIC ABUSE CALL. It was what everyone found in the cabin next that turned the whole case into a lot more than just a possible domestic homicide.

Chapter 1


Marty had always despised the sterile white walls and cold beige-colored floor tiles of hospital waiting rooms. He didn’t care how homey the administration tried to decorate this particular room or how many air fresheners sprayed out through the air conditioning vents; the smell of death permeated the room like a dead skunk on a highway. Today the walls seemed to come alive; he could feel them begin to slowly entrap him, like an insect about to be ingested by one of those carnivorous plants found in the jungle.

The doctors may had been cutting into his father’s hard head, figuratively as well as literally, but he could feel the sharp surgical instruments physicians used, as if they were cutting deep into his heart.

Marty’s experience as a Homicide Detective gave him a great deal of insight into the widespread nature of evil and horror; but the fear he felt as he sat there brought back the nightmares he had had as a child.

He knew, now, it was the only way his father knew to deal with the situation back then. His nine children had been about to lose their mother to cancer. At the time, Marty had been nine years old and resentful towards the woman he barely knew. She had been keeping his seven brothers and himself (one of which included his identical twin) from playing outside in the last remnants of a significant snowfall of the season.

His father thought the weak breath of his dying mother was something his nine children needed to experience in order to say their goodbyes; but Marty had already said his goodbyes, years earlier, when she first became ill. In the last five years of her life, his mother was in and out of the hospital, always bedridden. To be honest, to his young mind, it was as if she was more of a guest in their home than his mother. Marty’s ‘mothering’ came from his father and his only female sibling, Mary. It wasn’t until he became an adult that he realized how much he felt the loss of his father’s first and only love, his mom. Today, he realized, he was not ready to lose his dad. He knew, now, he probably never would be.

So many of the Keals had invaded the hospital while the doctors pranced around in his father’s brain . . . . The administrators were compelled to give the clan their own waiting room so as to not disturb the other patients and their families. No matter what the occasion or circumstance, with all of these Keals in one room, there was a tendency to drown out all of the other visitors. Earlier, Marty’s twin brother, Tommy, asked for someone to volunteer and take the littlest offspring home, but no one was unselfish enough to take on the task. It wasn’t that they didn’t want the job of taking care of the brood of toddlers who were getting antsy and increasingly boisterous; it was that they would rather hear firsthand the Captain (a title he retained after years employed as the head guard at the local prison) would be okay. That everything would be fine; and the tumor, which had the audacity to invade this man’s brain, was eliminated forever. Gone, poof, disappeared, never to be seen again.

Marty was so lost in his own thoughts, he became startled when his fiancé, Hope, sat down beside him and handed him a container of what the hospital had the nerve to call coffee. Up until this moment, every time someone passed by or whispered, he had jumped, expecting to see a physician in a white coat with word of how his dad’s surgery had gone.

“What the hell is taking so long?” Marty asked her, even though he knew she was just as clueless as the rest of them. To give her credit, it was Hope who originally insisted that their father have an MRI after they experienced a few strange incidents while in his company. Like the time he thought he lost his wallet and Marty found it in the freezer, cohabitating with a box of frozen Birds Eye sweet peas. His unusual absentmindedness and his suddenly calling people he knew well by wrong names they had all attributed to the natural progression of getting on in age. Callously, Marty would tease him, not at all considering the seriousness of it. A brain tumor was the last thing he had expected.

Although a physician herself, and on staff here at St. Katherine’s, Hope’s field was in Child Psychiatry; and she had no more information on how things were going with the Captain’s surgery than any of them did. Occasionally, she would get a sympathetic nod from a familiar nurse or two as the morning progressed. Hope had fallen hopelessly in love with not only Marty, but with his dad, and was on pins and needles as much as the rest of the family.

“It hasn’t been that long, Marty,” Hope told him, as she glanced at her watch; as if she needed to dignify her answer with solid proof. Marty took her hand in his as she sat down beside him, her knee barely reached halfway up his leg. Hope was so petite, barely five feet tall and all of ninety-nine pounds; next to all six-foot-three of Marty, she looked almost pixie-like. But looks could be deceiving and that was indeed the case here. This tiny woman had become his strength, his rock. Marty often wondered how he had ever gotten through the first thirty-four years on this earth without her.

Every time he laid his eyes on her, he felt amazed at his luck. The circumstances that had brought them together were cruel and sad, something they both have been exposed to in their lines of work. When they met two years ago, Marty was still an officer for the Fallsburg Police Department and Hope was making rounds at this same hospital. It was the day ten-year-old Brad Madison had been brought into the Emergency Room. Marty was the first officer to arrive on the scene that day. Mr. Madison, young Brad’s father, hadn’t shown up for work; his employer and several co-workers became concerned after several attempts to contact him or anyone in his family had failed. When Marty entered the home, he saw young Brad, bloodied and dazed, sitting in front of the television, engrossed in a video game. The bodies of his deceased parents lay upstairs, bludgeoned to death.
The nightmare case and the young boy, the main suspect of the crime, brought Marty and Hope together. It took Marty quite a while to convince this pixie of a woman to trust him and, if he was being honest, it took just as long for him to trust her. They both were on the raw end of bad relationships, which left them with tender wounds.

Marty squeezed her hand, careful not to put too much pressure on the finger that now possessed the diamond engagement ring he had slipped on her finger six months ago. He was about to tell her it had felt like an eternity when the room suddenly got quiet. Marty looked up to see all of the Keals’ eyes focused on the doorway and immediately recognized his father’s surgeon, who had just entered the room and was heading towards them.

Marty couldn’t tell by the look on the surgeon’s face what he was about to say, but he could tell by the tension in the room that he was not the only one holding his breath. Marty felt Hope’s hand tighten around his and the diamond cut into his skin, but he didn’t feel any pain. Marty glanced over to see if he could read her face. He knew, as a physician herself, Hope was more in tune with the expressions of other medical professionals and would be more apt to accurately read the look on Dr. Gary Cohen’s normally stern face.

“The surgery went well; and I believe the hemangioblastoma has been completely and successfully removed, although it was quite a bit larger than we expected. Your father is headed over to the recovery room now, and should be able to receive visitors in about an hour or so . . . depending on his reaction to the anesthesia,” he told them as he wiped his horn-rimmed glasses with the sleeve of his lab coat.

As he spoke, his eyes had drifted over each one of them, and finally focused on Hope. Marty didn’t know if it was because the surgeon was attracted to her or if he was more comfortable discussing the outcome with the only other physician in the room—and not the eight Keal brothers who towered over him physically.
All of the male Keals were civil servants: four with the FDNY, three with the NYPD, and Marty himself, who was a detective with the Fallsburg, New York Police Department. Each and every one of them attacking the man with questions all at once was probably a little intimidating. Marty’s sister, Mary, the only female Keal sibling and non-civil servant (her belly still swollen from the recent birth of her fifth child), and who was definitely the most practical in this roomful of Keals, got loud enough to shut them all up. As soon as the noise died down, she bravely asked what the rest of them were all thinking. “It won’t come back, will it?” Mary questioned him, her arms full, as the youngest of her brood tried desperately to find his way to his mother’s breast and his afternoon snack.

Dr. Cohen went off on a medical tangent and they waited, paying attention as if they were completely comprehending what the hell he was saying.

“Hemangioblastomas are the rarest central nervous system tumors, only two percent on average. They can occur sporadically, or they can be in association with Von Hippel-Lindau Syndrome.” He explained further as he noticed their bewildered looks. “Von Hippel-Lindau Syndrome is a rare, autosomal dominant genetic condition on chromosome three, specifically. Autosomal dominant, it is a genetic condition in which both parents pass the gene on to the patient. These tumors usually have a good prognosis if diagnosed early and are surgically removed. But there is usually more than one tumor associated with VHL.”

He stopped when he realized he was losing them with the medical mumbo jumbo.
It was Hope that put it all in prospective. She turned to Mary and smiled, answering Marty’s big sister with a seemingly confident, “Nope, probably not. It won’t likely be coming back.”
Hope’s answer seemed to satisfy the rest of the family—but there was something . . .  something in those big green eyes of hers that troubled Marty.

“If there is nothing more?” Dr. Cohen asked, his short, muscular neck straining as he tried to maintain eye contact with the adult Keals in the room. An obvious and difficult task, since the youngest and shortest of them, Marty’s brother Danny, stood at six-foot-two. It hit Marty then, the reason the good doctor spent most of his time focused on Hope was not only because she was easy to look at, but because she was more in his line of vision.

“What happens now?” Tommy asked, one arm around his wife Shavon, her belly swollen with twins, the other lifting his three-year-old daughter, Morgan, who was starting to verbalize her displeasure at being stuck in the waiting room all this time.

“As soon as your dad is out of recovery and cognitive enough to go over a protocol for his medical options, I will sit down with him and anyone else who cares to participate, and discuss those options. I don’t believe there will be any residual effects, and he won’t need any physical therapy; but that is something that remains to be seen once he is fully conscious. If there is nothing else, I need to make my rounds. Please keep the visits minimal for today. Your father needs as much rest as possible.”

He turned and smiled as he shook a few hands, including Marty’s. Before he exited the room, Dr. Cohen took one long last look at the Keal brigade. He couldn’t hide it from Marty. The expression on the man’s face betrayed what could only be his amusement at the size of the group that had been staring him down.

To be perfectly honest, they could be an overwhelming bunch. Marty must admit, and not to be egotistical, but they were a very good-looking group. They were all physically fit, due to their professions, not to mention their competitive nature of trying to outdo each other in the gym—or anywhere else, for that matter. Hope often complained that when situations arose like this one, when she found herself among all of them at the same time, she feels as if she is caught in the middle of a Playgirl magazine shoot. In fact, she wasn’t too far off. All of the brothers have posed, at one time or another, as shirtless models in the FDNY and NYPD calendars. Marty’s brothers, ironically, often called him the ugly duckling because he has never been anyone’s month. (Not because he was hard to look at, but because Fallsburg, New York doesn’t have its own calendar).

Shavon suggested that they should go down and get something to eat in the cafeteria since most of them hadn’t eaten in hours. They had been too nervous to stomach the thought of food. They were all just beginning to exit the waiting room and head down to the cafeteria when the ruckus began.

Marty had never heard anything like the guttural sound that came out of the child’s throat before in all of his life. At first, he couldn’t tell where the screams were coming from; the hallways were tiled and noise had a tendency to echo off of the walls. Everyone on the floor of the hospital stopped in their tracks to listen to the same strange sound he was hearing.

Marty walked out of the waiting room and into the corridor to see what the heck was going on.
The boy’s arms were flaying like an injured bird trying to take flight. He was running in Marty’s direction, like a wild animal, with two hospital attendants and a police officer in hot pursuit.
Every time one of the attendants went to grab him, he managed to twist away with the agility of a professional football player being chased by three-hundred-pound tacklers. As the kid ran, he turned and shot a look into each of the patient’s rooms as if he was looking for somebody.
“DDDDIIIRTTTEEEEE!!!” He screamed over and over again, his shouts coming in short bursts as he ran. When he turned to see where his pursuers were, he ran into what he must have thought was a brick wall. His little neck snapped back violently, his hair, a mess of long brown curls, spun in all directions. “Whoa!” Marty told him. Marty grabbed him by the forearms as he ran straight into his left thigh. The boy glanced up at him, startled at first, and then without warning, sunk his teeth into Marty’s leg, bearing down with every ounce of strength he could muster.

“Shit! Damn!” Marty screamed loudly. Marty guessed that he had expected the pain he inflicted to cause Marty to release him, but this kid didn’t know who he was messing with. The boy stared up at him, in utter disbelief, and then started his screaming again.

“Dddddiiiitrrtteee!” The sound was piercing now that the boy was directly under him.
Marty looked up at the attendants and the police officer whom he recognized as one of the newer recruits. The three of them were doubled over trying to catch their breath. Apparently, they had been chasing this kid for a while.

Marty grabbed the kid with one arm, lifting him in one swoop; he wrapped him tightly to his chest to keep him from biting him again. He used his other arm to clamp his legs down to his body, to stop his voracious kicking.
Marty looked up again and noticed a crowd gathering in the hallway. The kid was still screaming, so he hugged him tighter to his chest and placed his hand gently, yet firmly, on the back of his head to muffle the boy’s screams with his own body. Marty heard her before he saw her.
“Did you get him?” Jean Whitley asked no one in particular. She was rapidly making her way towards Marty, as the human barracuda continued to kick violently, trying to make a getaway. It was Marty’s partner, Jean, her face beet red and visibly upset.

As soon as she saw the kid was securely in his custody, she let out what he assumed could only be a sigh of relief.

Ignoring the boy for a brief second, she turned her attention towards Marty. “How’s the Captain? Is the surgery over?” she asked as she glanced toward the room full of Keals, who now had joined the other spectators in the hospital corridor.

“He just came out of surgery.” Marty informed her as he tried to keep his precious package from escaping. “They think they got it all. What’s going on?” Marty changed the subject back to the boy who was still wiggling furiously in his arms.


Jean looked over at the attendants, who were still trying to catch their breath from the pursuit, and nodded. A female doctor arrived and exchanged a few words with Jean and the two men. From the corner of Marty’s eye, he saw the small hypodermic needle enter the upper part of the child’s thin arm. Within seconds, the struggling and screaming stopped and the little boy’s long and lean body fell limp in his arms. With a bit of reluctance, Marty handed him over to one of the men wearing a white coat. It must have been his training as a cop, but he made sure to take notice of the color of the man’s hair: black; the color of his eyes: brown; and his approximate height: five-foot-seven; and last but not least, his nametag, which read: Ken Lubin, with the initials LPN below it. If Marty was going to hand over his precious cargo, he wanted to know exactly who it was that was taking it from him.
                                       

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Thursday, July 10, 2014

Featured Author Dawn Kopman Whidden Faceless - Excerpt


Faceless 

Dawn Kopman Whidden



Epilogue

She thought she heard someone in the brush behind her. Glancing around, she couldn’t spot anything or anyone. Probably just a raccoon, she thought as she continued through the dark woods, looking for her friend. She wasn’t scared to walk alone through the forest with only the moonlight and a flashlight to make her path visible, but she was pissed at Jamie for running off. Now, because the girl was pulling one of her drama acts, she found herself tramping through the woods looking for her, instead of being back at the house partying with the others.

Her shrill scream penetrated the dark night. She didn’t hear the others approach from the woods until they reached the spot where she stood. They had heard her screaming and immediately made their way to
her location. She stood staring at what lay on the ground before her. She heard one of the others cry out. “Come on,” she heard someone say. “Let’s get out of here!”




CHAPTER ONE

When you’re a homicide detective as well as a mother and the phone rings at three a.m., your first instinct is to take inventory of your children.When the dispatcher requests your attendance at a crime scene, you try to calculate whether your children could possibly be anywhere in that vicinity.

Shaking off my sleepy fog-like consciousness, I took a deep breath as the dispatcher read off the address. I asked her to repeat it as I clumsily reached for the switch on my bedside lamp, my fingers feeling their way in the dark. Suddenly, I heard a soft pop and saw a flash of light .I jerked my hand away as the bulb chose that moment to burn out, almost as if in protest.

I waited until my eyes adjusted to the darkness and I resigned myself to working in just the dim moonlight that made its way through the slats in the window blinds. I grabbed the pen and pad sitting on my nightstand. As I sat up and cradled the phone between my neck and shoulder, I felt my husband Glenn’s strong fingers start to massage the other side. He was barely awake, yet he was trying to help me relax. He knows all too well that these calls can lead to emotionally draining days and weeks ahead.

“125 Cedar Hill Road, detective,” she told me. “I tried to reach Detective Moran, but he isn’t returning my calls.”

“It’s okay, Wendy, I’ll take it,” I told her, just before I hung up the phone. Now I had another concern and now I had something else to worry about. Where was my partner of seven years? Was Joe sleeping off an alcoholic stupor? Maybe it was better that he wasn’t answering his calls.

“What’s up?” Glenn asked me, rubbing the sleep from his eyes. He started to lean over to get his glasses, but I stopped him. “I’ve got to go. Go back to sleep, honey.” I pushed the button on my watch. It gave off a purple glow, allowing me to read the time.

“I probably won’t be back in time to get Bethany off to school. Can you take her? She’s got that science project and it would be awkward for her to take it on the bus.”

I am not much of a multi-tasker and I was trying hard to coordinate getting dressed in the dark and thinking of all the things that I was not going to be able to do that day. I knew it was going to happen, and I tried hard to avoid the inevitable, but damn if I didn’t stub my toe on the iron leg at corner of the bed.

“Damn! Damn!” I cried, tears welling up in my eyes as the pain shot up my leg. It didn’t last long, because I bit my tongue the moment I grabbed my foot to rub. Now the tears were flowing down my cheek. If there were any doubts in my mind at this moment, they were no longer part of the equation: It was not going to be a good day.

Suddenly, the room filled with a burst of light. In my exasperated state, I didn’t realize that Glenn had gotten up and flipped on the wall switch.

“You know, Jean, turning on the light isn’t going to ruin my sleep any more than you screaming in agony. Your trying to be considerate sometimes costs us both,” he declared, pretending to be stern while trying to keep a smile from betraying his amusement at my pain. I couldn’t help but smile at him. It never failed to surprise me how calming his voice was. After almost twenty years of marriage, I still found myself deeply in love with him. His deep and sexy vocal tone was enough to make me melt, yet visually, he had so much more of an effect on me. His deep-set green eyes and thick black eyes lashes (which any woman would die for), combined with his chiseled facial features (which were probably a throwback to his one-sixteenth American Indian ancestry) would make any pain seem to fade away. How easy it was giving birth to my two children when I found myself staring into those gorgeous green eyes so many years ago.

“Sorry,” I offered as I gave him a quick kiss on the lips. Taking a little bit more care now, I took my police-issued Glock 22 out of its lockbox and positioned it in my shoulder holster.

“Be careful out there, Jean—you’re not easily replaced.” His tone reflecting his fatigue.

“Go back to sleep,” I told him as I walked out the bedroom door. I walked down the hallway, and then stopped and backed up a bit as I passed my daughter’s room. I took a peek and laughed to myself as I saw
her spread diagonally across her canopied bed. She never did sleep from one end of the bed to the other. Even as a baby, she would lie across the crib corner to corner, as if she was compelled to take up the most space.

When she did crawl into bed with Glenn and me, we inevitably would end up sleeping on the living room couch, leaving her to enjoy our bed. I decided that if her father ever allowed her to grow up and get married, I would buy a king size bed for her and her husband. It would be a requirement for her to have a successful marriage. I stepped over Roxy, the four-legged family member, who barely raised an eyebrow as I walked out of the house through the kitchen door. I pulled out of the garage, hoping that the squeal of the automatic door would not disturb my neighbors.

A full moon hung in the sky, illuminating my driveway, which is probably why I didn’t notice that my headlights weren’t on until I started driving down my street. I turned the knob on the dashboard and my
headlights came on, spooking a cottontail, which sprinted in front of me. I barely missed turning it into road kill. I didn’t know what I was going to find at 125 Cedar Hill Road, but I knew it wasn’t going to be pretty. Dead bodies usually aren’t. I also didn’t know whether I was going to find my partner, Joe, there—and if I did, what condition he would be in.

A light mist hit my windshield as the dark road loomed before me. These mountain roads were hazardous in the daylight, but at this time of the night, they could be downright treacherous. Too many fatalities happened on this very stretch of road, and I didn’t intend to end up a statistic—tonight or any other night.

A cloud must have passed by and blocked the moon’s light, so I turned on my high beams. The shafts of light looked like two colorless kaleidoscopes leading me down an endless dark tunnel.

One twenty-five Cedar Hill Road was on the outskirts of town, where the population of the town of Fallsburg is sparse, but affluent. A few of the homes could be considered mini mansions. Several of them sat on the edge of the mountain with a view of the small city of Monticello below.

I was so intent on watching the road, fearing that a deer would decide it was a perfect time to cross the highway that I hadn’t noticed the creature that was crawling up my right thigh. I felt the tickle first, and then I spied the damn thing creeping up my leg. I knew I shouldn’t overreact—it was just a bug—but I was petrified.

Afraid to take my eyes of the road, and with my hands locked onto the steering wheel in a death grip, I used my peripheral vision to track it. This had to be the biggest roach I’d ever laid eyes on, and it was on me. My stomach was now in knots as I realized this creature had wings. I had to do something quick, before it took flight and landed on my face.

Taking a deep breath and trying not to take my eyes off the road, I took one hand off the wheel and made a fist. My jaw clenched and my stomach turned as my fist smashed down on my thigh and I felt the crunch under the base of my hand. It was everything I could do not to scream in disgust as I rubbed my hand against my pants, trying to get the bug’s outer shell and guts off my skin. Shuddering, I finally let my breath loose. I was feeling relieved, but that lasted for just a second. At that moment, my cell phone rang and
shattered the silence.

Fumbling around, I grabbed the cell from my purse.

“Whitley,” I blurted out my name.

“Jean, it’s Marty, what’s your ETA?”

“I’m just about there, Marty. They called you in?” I questioned him, my thoughts still drifting to the remains of the roach on my pants.

“They couldn’t get hold of Joe,” he told me almost apologetically.

“I suppose I’m the next best thing.” He paused for a second, and then, as if he carefully made a conscious decision how much he should say over the phone, he continued. “It’s not pretty… well, you’ll see when you get here.”

I offered him a quick goodbye. I liked and respected Marty, but I was disappointed and angry that my partner was A.W.O.L. I was hoping Joe would pull himself together and get back on track. It broke my heart that my best friend and mentor was on the verge of losing everything, but from his perspective, he already had. It had been two years since his wife, Connie, had died suddenly of cardiac arrest.

Connie and Joe were just about to celebrate their twenty-fifth anniversary when she succumbed to an undetected heart condition. Connie was like a sister to me and a surrogate aunt to my children, so a part of my world was shattered that day, as well.

Joe’s daughter, Annie, was stationed in Afghanistan at the time, and returned to duty shortly after her mother’s funeral. She was scheduled to return home to the states six weeks later, when Taliban militants ambushed her Humvee.

She survived, but suffered brain damage, and was still hospitalized at a VA hospital in Riviera Beach, Florida. The prognosis was sketchy, however, we held out some hope that Annie would be able to overcome an array of disabilities.

Now Joe was angry at the world, but more importantly, he was angry with God. When Connie was alive, she would drag Joe to church every chance she got, and although he bitched and moaned about it, I knew he felt a strong connection to his Catholic upbringing.

In the beginning, when Connie passed away, he found himself going to church on his days off. Instead of going to the Lion’s Den, the local pub that served as a meeting place for off-duty cops, he found himself going to St. Mary’s Church, where Connie and Joe were married over twenty-seven years ago. It was where his only daughter, Annie, was baptized and christened, and finally, where Connie was eulogized.

He admitted to me that he felt comfort and solace there, and that he felt his wife’s spirit there—that is, until he got word of Annie’s injuries. After that, as far as Joe was concerned, the devil had not only won more than his share of battles, the devil had won the war, and Joe was just another casualty.

My thoughts of Joe were interrupted as I came around a curve to 125 Cedar Hill Road. There I was met with an array of activity, illuminated by flashing red and blue lights of scattered official vehicles, some of them with their motors still running and their exhausts spitting out fumes.

Crime scene technicians were making their way into the woods and I followed closely behind them. Within a few minutes, I found myself in the mist of more activity. Yellow tape and evidence placards were strategically placed throughout the wooded area. I carefully walked a few steps forward praying it was only weeds and dirt I was stepping on. A few steps more brought me to a small clearing and there it was. Two officers were erecting a small pop-up canopy over a gray tarpaulin. I squinted, trying to get a more accurate view of what lay under the tarp.

The moon was full and the glow from it seemed directly targeted on the spot and illuminating the area. I closed my eyes, hoping that when I opened them, I would realize my first assumption was wrong. It wasn’t too hard to imagine that underneath the tarp lay something or someone of small stature. I prayed silently that what had been discovered was not the body of a child.

My arrival had caught Detective Marty Keal’s attention, and he made his way toward me. Although the man may have been awakened from a dead sleep and been called in to work unexpectedly, Marty looked like he stepped out of a modeling photo shoot: Six foot three and broad-shouldered, with a body fat index which, I guessed, measured in the negative range. His physique was complimented by a mass of thick black hair that fell in waves outlining a perfectly formed face dotted with dimples that stayed hidden until he smiled.

His physical beauty was only just a bonus to his warm personality. Detective Marty Keal was just a hell of a nice guy, and a pleasure to work with. As luck would have it, Marty had been spending the night at his girlfriend’s place when his cell phone rang. The address that the dispatcher gave him was less than a ten-minute drive from Hope’s house.

If he had spent the night at home with his dad, affectionately known by all as the “Captain” a name the old man had acquired while working as a corrections officer at the state penitentiary, it would have taken him three times as long to get to the scene.

He reached his destination pulling his unmarked car behind Officer Patricia Beck’s cruiser, and grabbed a flashlight from the glove compartment.

Although a few large estates were scattered throughout the area, this particular spot was just on the outskirts of a wooded section. The full moon was shining brightly in the night sky, but a forest of tall pine trees cast dark shadows on the ground, making it difficult to see.

To make matters worse, and although Marty would deny it vehemently if asked, he suffered from ophidiophobia. Nothing could make Marty’s skin crawl faster than a slimy, long reptile that made rattling and hissing noises.

Ten yards from the road, he spotted Officer Beck. She stood directly across from a young girl who seemed to be in emotional distress. He could hear Officer Beck’s own voice quavering as she attempted to calm the girl down. As he got closer, he noticed two other girls standing in the shadows.

It was apparent that Beck, who was the first officer to arrive at the scene, was a little shell-shocked. She appeared to be desperately in need of reassurance. Even in the dim lighting, Marty could see that the pint-
sized rookie’s face was a ghostly white, with a slight green tint. She looked as if she was trying hard to keep whatever she had for dinner from making a re-appearance.

Marty couldn’t blame her. He recalled puking in some bushes at a gory crime scene not that long ago.

“Patty, what do we have?” he asked as he tried inconspicuously to shine the flashlight across the faces of the three girls. He pegged them to be most likely high school age. Grabbing hold of the crook of Marty’s arm, Officer Beck turned to the girls. “We’ll be right back, please try and relax… just stay right here.” She turned back to Marty.

“It’s bad, Detective Keal—real bad.”

She turned on her flashlight, establishing a bright LED path ahead of them, and she led him toward the tree line. The sound of the weeds and small rocks beneath their shoes seemed to echo throughout the woods. Each crunch beneath their feet seemed to be magnified tenfold as they walked down an overgrown footpath.

Officer Beck stopped abruptly, causing Marty to bump into her. “There.” She pointed with her light a few feet ahead.

Marty followed the ray of the young officer’s flashlight with his He could make out a small body lying face up, surrounded by a mound of broken twigs and weeds. Naked from the waist up, the small exposed white breasts assured him that his first assumption of it being a female was correct. He shined his flashlight slowly up from the torso toward her head, which lay at an angle facing away from them. Something seemed to be placed over her face, because he couldn’t make out any of her features. He walked closer in order to get a better

His first thought was that someone had placed a blanket over her, or that she was wearing a mask of some sort, but he wasn’t sure. He finally understood what it was as he caught a whiff of it. There was no mistaking it now; it was the distinct odor of burnt hair and flesh. There was no mask and there was no blanket: whoever this was no longer had a face. Instead, there was just a charcoal mass of melted skin
and muscle tissue. He turned back to Officer Beck who was kneeling now, head between her knees, trying hard not to be sick.

Marty walked over and knelt next to her, his large palm gently rubbing her tiny back.

“Hey, you okay?” he asked, as he tried to swallow some bile of his She nodded as her top teeth bit down on her bottom lip. It reminded him of that thing that Hope would do if she thought she was going to start to cry.

“Do you know who she is, Patty?” he asked her, still rubbing her back. “Do those girls know who she is?”

His hand rose and fell as he felt her inhale and exhale.

“They said that she is a friend of theirs, they all came up here together and she got separated from them. They went looking for her and…” As they heard the sound of backup vehicles arriving they immediately both let out a sigh of relief. “Come on,” he said as he led her back down the path to where they had left the three girls. He could see the other officers and crime scene investigators exiting their cars as they reached the opening of the woods.

Somehow, he managed to go on autopilot and began the task of directing crime scene techs and officers to maintain the integrity of the crime scene. This was his first major case, and he knew that this would make or break his reputation as a Homicide Detective. He was determined to do everything right.

Yet there was more at stake here than his reputation. Everything he did from this moment on would be key to finding the animal that murdered the girl now lying faceless in the woods. He prayed silently that Jean would arrive quickly. Marty knew that there was nothing better than the voice of experience.
                     

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